T31859 /fap/ [ZONE] HKG4

Thread 31859

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Anonymous 16jan2024(tu)18:11 No.100747 OP P1

[ZONE] HKG4 - Vivian

Title says it all

[ZONE] HKG4 - Vivian .swf (3.27 MiB)
550x400, Compressed (Deflate). 1478 frames, 30 fps (00:49).
Ver6, AS1/AS2. Network access: No. Text: No.
Bitmaps: Yes. Audio: Yes. Video: No.
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Anonymous 19jan2024(fr)09:55 No.100769 A ~~P2R1~~

um...
1. Would be much better if you shrinked the lower buttons or even did an option to hide all buttons.
2. I'm not sure about Vivian's anatomy (never played Nintendo games), but does she really have ears? If so, I think you should've hidden them under the hat. Speaking of the artstyle, this mouth looks especially bad to me (even though I probably draw as good as you).
3. Again, I haven't heard Vivian's voice, but are you sure these are the most fitting moans to her?

Sorry, bro, but you gotta train harder. Try editing Sakaki next time

Anonymous 19jan2024(fr)09:59 No.100770 B ~~P3R2~~

she doesn't have ears or any example of a canon voice, I respect the desire to stick her into a flash but this is a rough one to make work for the character

if nothing else removing the ear shape and making her mouth look as cartoony as you can manage would probably help as much as you really could